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Wednesday, June 3, 2015

Joseph S.

Keep the Candies



I think we should keep delicious Mars and Hershey candies because Dark Chocolate can be good for you, some candies in general can help the body, and some candies help with some diseases.


One reason Mars and Hershey should keep the candies is because dark chocolate is good for you. One reason dark chocolate is good for you is it slows down blood pressure. You might think this isn't  important but this is a very good health benefit from chocolate. Also, dark chocolate helps blood flow and can help a bad cough. This shows that chocolate is not only good for a bad cough but it can also help during cold season.  Only a fool would say dark chocolate has antioxidant and flavonoids that help with heart diseases. Well guess what? It’s true! Not only does this mean that dark chocolate has health benefits but it can be good for the heart even if you are three or one hundred. In the British Medical paper, there is a paragraph on how dark chocolate can decrease a heart attack by 36%.          


Another reason Mars and Hershey should keep the candies is because it’s true how  candy, in general, helps the body. For example, cotton candy restores blood vessels. This means when you are at a carnival and eat some cotton candy you are helping your body. Also, gum can help with stress! Trust me its the yummy truth. If you are nervous before the big game, just throw some gum in your mouth. In addition, people who eat candy live longer. If you want to stick around the world a little while longer just eat some candy every day.

The last reason Mars and Hershey should keep the candies is, candy helps with some diseases. For example some chocolate can help diseases that attack the heart. This proves that some candies can treat diseases. Also some chocolate helps with amnesia. Some cases of memory loss can be very bad but you can help treat it with some chocolate. In addition, cocoa can slow down the growth of cancer! All of that is why I think we should keep the candies.


Some critics, like normal moms and dads say candies are too sugary to eat. They also would say that you don’t need it right now. While this might be true, candy can also be good for you. Dark chocolate can be good for you. Some candies in general can help the body, and some candy help with diseases. Me and my friends love to eat candy. Some  of us sneak it without our parents knowing. Now if we ever get caught (which we wont) we will have some very good explanations why we did it. Well it’s clear, and this article shows very good reasons why Mars and Hershey should keep the candies!!!!!!


 





 

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