Julia M.

Rachel the Star

 Once upon a time there was a bear named Rachel. She is an ice skater bear. She is a girl. Rachel has silver ice skates. She also has a pretty blue flower on her dress. Rachel has a blue hat. It is a bright as the sky. Rachel is fast because she goes across the ice. She likes to slide across the ice.

One afternoon Rachel was practicing her scene. She had to do a flip but she could not do it. Then Rachel found a girl who can do a flip on the ice. She taught Rachel how to do a flip on the ice. Then Rachel kept practicing and she tried one more flip, and she did it! Then the next morning it was Rachel’s recital. She got out of bed and she hopped into her closet and got changed. At her recital, she did a flip and she got a gold trophy.