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Wednesday, June 3, 2015

Ava C.

Keep the Candies As Is!



Did you know that  most people like dark chocolate over milk chocolate, or  white chocolate? This essay is all about why Hershey's and Mars should not, would not, could not, take away these candies. In this essay I show you  that dark chocolate is healthy for you, how Mars and Hershey's make some of the most popular Halloween candies, and how some sweets are healthy, surprisingly. Keep the candies as is. This is because these are some of the most popular and classic candies on the line. These candies are known for being around and they shouldn't be taken away! Keep on reading and you will find out why!
My first reason for keeping the candy is dark chocolate is very healthy for you. For example dark chocolate helps with blood flow by opening blood vessels.This shows that oxygen can run through your body. Also dark chocolate has antioxidants and flavonoids that help with heart disease. This is good for anyone who has heart disease, eat dark chocolate! It will help you! In addition, a study in the British Medical Journal found that two pieces of dark chocolate a day are good for you.So if you need more antioxidants eat dark chocolate! And if you ever have a sweet tooth,  remember dark chocolate yummy and healthy!
Another reason why we should keep the candies is Mars and Hershey's make some of the most popular Halloween candies.These candies are important because if they discontinue nobody will have some of their favorite candies! For example Reese's Peanut Butter Cups are the most popular Halloween candy. Adding on, M&Ms are the second most popular Halloween candy. There is M&Ms with peanuts too if you don't like plain M&Ms.Lastly, snickers  are the third most popular Halloween candy. It's crazy talk that Hershey's and Mars would consider taking away these candies.


Just another reason, is candy, and things that are related to candy are good for you. For example, gummy bears are healthy because they have a tint of fruit that is sweet but healthy. If you want gummy bears that are less sweet get the organic gummy bears. Also chocolate covered strawberries are good for you because they have a source of fruit and antioxidants. Again antioxidants are never a bad thing, a lot of sweets have antioxidants. One more thing is sugar free gum helps with concentration. If your gonna take a test, remember sugar free gum will help you. It says it all in the name SUGAR FREE GUM. Its delicious gum without all the sugar!


Others might say that not all candies and chocolate are healthy for you, but this essay  just stated to keep the candies because some can be healthy for you! This shows that even though sweets can be a little sweet, they can be healthy for you! And its good to have a sweet treat once in a while. If you don't like sweet candy, try a piece of dark chocolate each day. Its good for you, believe it or not! Keep the candies as is! Even dentists like to eat candy! Just ask them.


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