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Tuesday, June 2, 2015

Brian F.

Many people like Hershey chocolate because it’s nice and sweet.  Mars and Hershey candy company should keep candies because they have natural ingredients, dark chocolate is healthy for you, and gum helps you learn.

One reason Mars and Hershey candy company should keep candies is because chocolate has natural ingredients. For example, the flavor is natural because they use real cocoa beans. Also, they use real milk with it too. Natural ingredients is better than fake because they are good for you.

Another reason Mars and Hershey candy company should keep candies is dark chocolate is healthy for you.  For example, dark chocolate protect you from ultraviolet rays. It also helps us with our flexibility.  “Those who ate chocolate five or more times a week were 60% less likely to have heart disease,” said Kelly McGonigal.

One last reason Mars and Hershey candy company should keep candies is because gum helps us learn  For example, gum improves alertness. “Chewing gum also seems to increase serotonin levels, may explain why chomping boosts mood,” said Kelly McGonigal.
Others might say that candy is bad for you because it has sugar but you could eat some chocolate that’s good for you.There are many reasons why Mars and Hershey candy company should continue making candies. Some reasons include containing natural ingredients which can help us improve our health and learning.

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