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Tuesday, June 2, 2015

Sam W.

         Keep Candy!
Hershey and Mars candy companies should keep their candies because candies can be good for you, chocolate is good for you in many ways, and the Hershey company helps many people. I know all of this because I have spent weeks in my school, Samuel Staples Elementary, doing research on a debate about how Mars and Hershey companies should keep their candies as is, continue candies but make changes, and finally, discontinue candies. I didn’t choose any of the last 2 because I thought very hard and said to myself “What would happen to the delicious taste they leave in your mouth?” so, I chose and did research on why Hershey and Mars candy companies should keep their delicious candies the way they are!
One of the reasons Hershey and Mars companies should keep their candies  is that many candies can be good for you in certain ways. For example, gum can reduce stress and block pain. This is good because sometimes you're angry and people don’t want to be around you. Chewing gum can prevent this by reducing that stress and anger!  Also, sugar can make you more focused and restore willpower. In addition, cotton candy can regrow blood vessels inside your body. Finally, “people who eat candy normally live longer than people who don’t,” says the Harvard School of Public Health. This means you could live an extra month or year in your life which would be amazing!
Another reason Hershey and Mars companies should keep their candies is because chocolate is good for you in many other ways.  For example, chocolate fights inflammation. Chocolate also decreases the chance of getting a disease, most likely heart disease. Nobody wants a heart disease, but almost no one realizes, if you don’t want a heart disease eat more chocolate! also, chocolate can protect you from diabetes.  Also, “dark chocolate can prevent heart attacks and heart diseases,” claims the National Heart Lung and Blood Institute. I wish I knew that dark chocolate protected you from diabetes before, because, my father, Paul Wizda, just got prediabetes. I feel so bad for him. Also, chocolate can protect you from sunburns or ultraviolet light. In addition, white chocolate cleans your blood to make sure there are no bad things in it.
Another reason Mars and Hershey companies should keep their candies as is, is because the Hershey company helps people.  For example, the Hershey company donates to many different charities.  Also, Hershey gives money to people who work for the Hershey company so that they can have money to support their family. This is good because people might not be able to get any other job. This job might be the last job available for them to support their family. It is very bad when a family cannot support themselves. That is why it’s good that the Hershey company pays working people there! In addition, the chocolate the Hershey company makes are given to kids to make them feel happy! Finally the Hershey company says, “Hershey had plans drawn up for a model community that included housing for executives and ordinary workers alike, schools, churches, parks, recreational facilities and a trolley system. Unlike other ‘company towns,’ Hershey’s was not intended to exploit its resident workers, but rather to provide for their welfare. As time went on, Hershey saw to it that the town (named Hershey, naturally) added a community building, a department store, a convention hall, an amusement park, a swimming pool and schools. Lots of schools.”  Milton Hershey really cared for children’s education. This shows that he is a very caring man.
If you think you can prove this wrong, you're wrong! I know this because, if you're tired and you can eat a couple pieces of candy and you feel like you just took a long nap. This is better than eating vegetables or healthier foods because it restores your energy faster, but, if we make the candies healthier or remove sugar content, there won’t be that effect.
Hershey and Mars, candy companies, should keep their candy as they are because candies can be good for you, chocolate is good for you in certain ways, the Hershey company helps people, and finally, because candy restores your energy fast! This is why I think that the Hershey and Mars companies should not change their candies by removing sugar or discontinuing their candies overall. You have seen and tasted these wonderful, delicious candies and now you are just going throw away all of the companies work and Milton Hershey’s dream. Don’t do that. you know you’re better than that.
    

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