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Tuesday, June 2, 2015

John L.

Slayer

John L. made a new discovery in the Red Forest. He came across a cow farm,  and the next day all the cows were gone. John wanted to know what happened to the cows. As john was walking, he saw a furry animal that looked like a goat, lion and snake. This was a slayer!  

John was surprised there was a lion in the forest. John followed the amazing animal  into his cave. The animal breathed fire to warm up his cave.  The animal has 8 legs for it to have better grip to climb trees and into his cave. He breathes fire on his favorite rock to warm up his cave, too.

The amazing animal can smell other animals that are up to a mile away.  The animal can smell a cow from far away. The amazing animal hunts in the middle of the night. This animal also has horns to help catch the cow. When it catches prey, it breathes fire. The meat is cooked when the animal eats it.

Even though the animal is big, it still has predators. It breathes fire to protect itself from other animals like the grizzly bear. It burns the predator to protect itself. It also spits out acidic venom that makes the enemy that’s trying to attack him get damaged, so the animal falls down and is easy meat.

This final stand I ever saw in a battle against a grizzy bear and the lion/goat/snake--the bear won! And when the bear saw me, I started screaming and running away. When I was walking and saw the slayer, I was excited. This is a wonderful discovery.

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