Yu-Min C.

Jack's Unexpected Fall

One day there was an architect bear named Jack. He is thirty years old. He has a compass as cool as a rock star’s guitar. He also has a pencil as sharp as a shark’s tooth. He has a blueprint that isn’t really blue. He also has a rubber ducky for ideas when he doesn’t know what to build for a statue. Jack is kind because he helps the townsfolk in many different ways. He likes to make blueprints, build elevators, and build towns. One day Jack was building an elevator. When he was finished, he went up to his highest mark point and began climbing. One night he had climbed a mile and built another mark point and built a store and hotel. He stayed in the hotel for one night. He almost reached the top when all of a sudden he fell back to the bottom! Then he realized that he ran out of energy! One day, Jack decided to continue building the elevator until it reached the top of the mountain so he could start the biggest project he had ever done…build an entire city all by himself. If he completed this project, he would win a trophy and be world famous! His idea worked! He started building and building and building for 8 days, 6 hours, 4 minutes, and 2 seconds! But the building was worth it. The wandering townsfolk had a home, and Jack was world famous! Jack still builds, and he has an idea in mind. But he does not want to do it after building a big city.