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Monday, June 8, 2015

Rita P.

Candy companies should keep making M&Ms and Mounds because a lot of people like and buy this kind of candy.

One reason Hershey and Mars should keep making candies is because M&Ms are the second most popular Halloween candy. They should keep M&Ms because it’s really good for Halloween, but don’t eat the candy too much so you don’t get bigger and it is not healthy. It’s really important that you don’t eat too much candy, because if you eat  too much candy you will get bigger. Your stomach will hurt and it is truly not healthy. Too much sugar, and too much candy colors is not healthy, and is bad for your body. So, don’t eat too much candy. It’s really important for yourself.

A second reason Hershey and Mars should keep making candies is so the companies can make money. Candy companies make billions of dollars worldwide on candy sales. The person who sells the candy doesn’t care about our health. They just care about making more money and this is not good. The person that makes candy doesn't care about customers being healthy or not healthy. They just care about making more money and it’s really  important that you watch yourself. I mean if you eat  too much candy you will get bigger, and this is not good for your body. So don’t eat too much candy and be careful with your body.          

 This is why you should keep the candy the way it is!!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             

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